DiaryEducationJapanese traditionLanguageUncorrected

Graduation Thesis

  •  In Japan, the graduation season is approaching. As is often the case, graduate research presentations are held in Mid-February, the deadline for graduation thesis is February as well.
     Today, I read and corrected my junior’s master theses carefully almost all day. It stands to reason that every sentence he wrote is perfect, but the connections of sentences were sometimes unnatural. Also, his story was sometimes logically incoherent. I was patiently looking for his mistakes and wrote correction comments. I was a little tired, but I’m happy to feel my junior’s growth.

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