【No. 1066】Cold or Food Poisoning
Nov 18, 2017 15:14
Yesterday I became sick.
Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I caught a cold.
Therefore, I went home early, ate dinner, and went to bed.
However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all food I ate for dinner.
It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms were finally lessened somewhat.
However, my condition is still bad -- in such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I caught a cold.
Therefore, I went home early, ate dinner, and went to bed.
However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all food I ate for dinner.
It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms were finally lessened somewhat.
However, my condition is still bad -- in such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
風邪？食中毒？
私は昨日、体調を崩しました。
喉と頭が痛かったので、風邪だと思い、早めに家に帰って寝ることにしました。
しかし、夜中に目が覚め、激しい頭痛と吐気に襲われ、夕飯に食べたものを全て吐き出してしまいました。
何度も頭痛と吐気で目が覚め、辛かったです。
結局、18時間くらい寝て、ようやく症状が和らぎました。
ただ、まだ頭が痛いので、今日の投稿はこのような簡単な日記にします。
私は昨日、体調を崩しました。
喉と頭が痛かったので、風邪だと思い、早めに家に帰って寝ることにしました。
しかし、夜中に目が覚め、激しい頭痛と吐気に襲われ、夕飯に食べたものを全て吐き出してしまいました。
何度も頭痛と吐気で目が覚め、辛かったです。
結局、18時間くらい寝て、ようやく症状が和らぎました。
ただ、まだ頭が痛いので、今日の投稿はこのような簡単な日記にします。
Corrections (1)
No. 1 Jon
- Yesterday I became sick.
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Yesterday I became sick.
This is fine, but usually we would say "Yesterday I got sick."
- Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I caught a cold.
- Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I'd caught a cold.
- Therefore, I went home early, ate dinner, and went to bed.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all food I ate for dinner.
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However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all of the food I ate for dinner.
"a feeling of nausea" is fine, but not necessary. You can just say "I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and nausea." :)
- It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
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It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
There's nothing wrong with the second "the" from a grammatical standpoint, but it's redundant.
- After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms were finally lessened somewhat.
- After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms finally subsided somewhat.
- However, my condition is still bad -- in such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
- However, my condition is still bad -- on such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Jon
No problem! I hope you feel better soon!
No problem! I hope you feel better soon!