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【No. 0899】Nintendo Switch

Jun 4, 2017 11:46
I finally bought a Nintendo Switch yesterday.

Software that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.

Playing games was for the first time in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.

I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.

As a result, I seem to have caught a cold.

I'm feeling weak and having a sore throat.

Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body using a long time today.
ニンテンドースイッチ

私は昨日、とうとうニンテンドースイッチを購入しました。

同時に購入したソフトは、ゼルダの伝説とマリオカートです。

久しぶりのゲームだったし、品薄でなかなか買うことができなかったので、とても興奮していました。

つい、真夜中までプレイしてしまいまい、掛け布団をしっかりかけずに寝てしまいました。

その結果、風邪を引いてしまったようです。

喉が痛く、体がだるいです。

明日から仕事なので、今日はじっくりと体を休めます。

Corrections (2)

No. 1 Mac
  • I finally bought a Nintendo Switch yesterday.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Software that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.
  • The games that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.

    I've never heard video games referred to as software, although I suppose that is correct from a very technical standpoint. Nobody would every say it like that though.

  • Playing games was for the first time in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
  • This is the first time I've played video games in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
  • I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
  • I played these games until midnight, losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.

    "Without getting wrapped in blankets" feels a little odd. Normally we would just say "without getting into bed"

  • As a result, I seem to have caught a cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm feeling weak and having a sore throat.
  • I'm feeling weak and have a sore throat.
  • Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body using a long time today.
  • Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body for a long time today.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 クライド
  • Nintendo Switch
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
  • I played until midnight, lost track of time, and fell asleep without wrapping myself in a blanket.

I hope you enjoy Zelda!! it's such a beautiful game!!

Great post kanotown! :D

Toru
Thank you so much for the correction, クライドさん!
Yes, it's really beautiful! :)

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