【No. 0899】Nintendo Switch
Jun 4, 2017 11:46
I finally bought a Nintendo Switch yesterday.
Software that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.
Playing games was for the first time in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
As a result, I seem to have caught a cold.
I'm feeling weak and having a sore throat.
Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body using a long time today.
Software that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.
Playing games was for the first time in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
As a result, I seem to have caught a cold.
I'm feeling weak and having a sore throat.
Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body using a long time today.
ニンテンドースイッチ
私は昨日、とうとうニンテンドースイッチを購入しました。
同時に購入したソフトは、ゼルダの伝説とマリオカートです。
久しぶりのゲームだったし、品薄でなかなか買うことができなかったので、とても興奮していました。
つい、真夜中までプレイしてしまいまい、掛け布団をしっかりかけずに寝てしまいました。
その結果、風邪を引いてしまったようです。
喉が痛く、体がだるいです。
明日から仕事なので、今日はじっくりと体を休めます。
私は昨日、とうとうニンテンドースイッチを購入しました。
同時に購入したソフトは、ゼルダの伝説とマリオカートです。
久しぶりのゲームだったし、品薄でなかなか買うことができなかったので、とても興奮していました。
つい、真夜中までプレイしてしまいまい、掛け布団をしっかりかけずに寝てしまいました。
その結果、風邪を引いてしまったようです。
喉が痛く、体がだるいです。
明日から仕事なので、今日はじっくりと体を休めます。
Corrections (2)
No. 1 Mac
- I finally bought a Nintendo Switch yesterday.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Software that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.
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The games that I bought at the same time were The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Mario Kart 8 Deluxe.
I've never heard video games referred to as software, although I suppose that is correct from a very technical standpoint. Nobody would every say it like that though.
- Playing games was for the first time in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
- This is the first time I've played video games in a while and the hardware was not easy to obtain, so I was very excited.
- I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
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I played these games until midnight, losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
"Without getting wrapped in blankets" feels a little odd. Normally we would just say "without getting into bed"
- As a result, I seem to have caught a cold.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I'm feeling weak and having a sore throat.
- I'm feeling weak and have a sore throat.
- Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body using a long time today.
- Since I have to work from tomorrow, I will rest my body for a long time today.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 クライド
- Nintendo Switch
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I played these games until midnight losing track of time, and fell asleep without getting wrapped in blankets.
- I played until midnight, lost track of time, and fell asleep without wrapping myself in a blanket.
I hope you enjoy Zelda!! it's such a beautiful game!!
Great post kanotown! :D
Toru
Thank you so much for the correction, クライドさん！
Yes, it's really beautiful! :)
Thank you so much for the correction, クライドさん！
Yes, it's really beautiful! :)