【No. 0865】Kamikochi
May 1, 2017 07:32
Today I will go to Kamikochi with my friends.
Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
On the other hand, the average temperature in summer is around 20 ℃, so you can go sightseeing comfortably.
However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
Since Kamikochi is very beautiful, when you come to Nagano prefecture, please visit it.
Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
On the other hand, the average temperature in summer is around 20 ℃, so you can go sightseeing comfortably.
However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
Since Kamikochi is very beautiful, when you come to Nagano prefecture, please visit it.
上高地
今日は友人と上高地に行く予定です。
上高地は、標高1500ｍ程の位置する、日本最大級の堆積平野です。
かつて、川が噴火活動によってがせき止められ池となり、そこに土砂が堆積してできたものと考えられています。
冬は非常に寒さが厳しく、1月の平均気温は-7.7℃、最低気温は-30℃以下になります。
一方夏は平均気温が20℃ほどとなり、とても涼しく気持ちよく観光できます。
ただし、一部地域は最暖月の平均気温が10℃を超えず、ツンドラ気候となっています。
もし長野県に来る機会があれば、是非訪れてみて下さい。
今日は友人と上高地に行く予定です。
上高地は、標高1500ｍ程の位置する、日本最大級の堆積平野です。
かつて、川が噴火活動によってがせき止められ池となり、そこに土砂が堆積してできたものと考えられています。
冬は非常に寒さが厳しく、1月の平均気温は-7.7℃、最低気温は-30℃以下になります。
一方夏は平均気温が20℃ほどとなり、とても涼しく気持ちよく観光できます。
ただし、一部地域は最暖月の平均気温が10℃を超えず、ツンドラ気候となっています。
もし長野県に来る機会があれば、是非訪れてみて下さい。
Corrections (2)
No. 1 Ellie
- Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
- Kamikochi is one of the largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
- It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
- It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities created a pond, then sediments deposited there.
- The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
- The winter in Kamikochi is very cold — the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
- However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
- However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, becuase it is a tundra climate.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Oceansea
- Today I will go to Kamikochi with my friends.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
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It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, and then deposited sediments there.
Your sentence is good.
Another idea is to write it like this:
"It is thought that eruption activities dammed up a river, forming a pond, causing sediments to be deposited there."
- The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- On the other hand, the average temperature in summer is around 20 ℃, so you can go sightseeing comfortably.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
- However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't doesn't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
I didn't even know what a depositional plain was. I had to look it up! Good word!
Kamikochi sounds beautiful! Now I want to go see it! =)
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections!
Yes, since it's beautiful, you should go there if you have a chance :)
...Unfortunately, we changed our plan to go Kamikochi because it rained yesterday.
Thank you very much for the corrections!
Yes, since it's beautiful, you should go there if you have a chance :)
...Unfortunately, we changed our plan to go Kamikochi because it rained yesterday.