【No. 0764】Deadline for Graduation Thesis
Jan 20, 2017 20:53
At the university where I work, today was a deadline for graduation thesis.
Students have been writing their theses all over creation for the last couple of days.
Yesterday, I had to help students' studies until late at night.
It was hell in many ways and I was exhausted.
Since the entrance gate closes during the midnight, I could not go home and I had to stay the night at my university.
Next, students will prepare for the graduation research presentation, which will be held in two weeks.
I sincerely want students to prepare for the presentation as early as possible.
Students have been writing their theses all over creation for the last couple of days.
Yesterday, I had to help students' studies until late at night.
It was hell in many ways and I was exhausted.
Since the entrance gate closes during the midnight, I could not go home and I had to stay the night at my university.
Next, students will prepare for the graduation research presentation, which will be held in two weeks.
I sincerely want students to prepare for the presentation as early as possible.
卒業論文の締切
私の勤める大学では、今日が卒業論文の提出締切日でした。
学生たちはここ数日で必死に卒論を仕上げていました。
私も昨日は夜遅くまで、学生の手伝いをする必要がありました。
かなり大変で、くたびれました。
門は夜の間閉鎖されるので、帰ることができず、大学に泊まらなければなりませんでした。
次は、二週間後の研究発表会に向けて、準備をしていきます。
今後は、もっと早くから準備を進めてもらいたいと切に願います。
私の勤める大学では、今日が卒業論文の提出締切日でした。
学生たちはここ数日で必死に卒論を仕上げていました。
私も昨日は夜遅くまで、学生の手伝いをする必要がありました。
かなり大変で、くたびれました。
門は夜の間閉鎖されるので、帰ることができず、大学に泊まらなければなりませんでした。
次は、二週間後の研究発表会に向けて、準備をしていきます。
今後は、もっと早くから準備を進めてもらいたいと切に願います。
Corrections (1)
No. 1 ksionsze
- Deadline for Graduation Thesis
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- At the university where I work, today was a deadline for graduation thesis.
- At the university where I work the deadline for submitting a graduation thesis expired today.
- Students have been writing their theses all over creation for the last couple of days.
- Students have been writing their theses frantically for the last couple of days.
- Yesterday, I had to help students' studies until late at night.
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Yesterday I had to help them study until late at night.
It's not necessary to put a comma after "yesterday" but it's not a mistake either.
In my opinion "helping students' studies" doesn't sound natural... But you mentioned the students in the previous sentence, so you can just say "them" and add a verb instead
- It was hell in many ways and I was exhausted.
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It was hell in many ways, and I was exhausted.
In this sentence "and" joins two clauses, so you can use a comma here
- Since the entrance gate closes during the midnight, I could not go home and I had to stay the night at my university.
- Since the entrance gate is closed after midnight, I could not go home and I had to stay the night at my university.
- Next, students will prepare for the graduation research presentation, which will be held in two weeks.
- Next, the students will prepare for the graduate research presentation, which is due in two weeks.
- I sincerely want students to prepare for the presentation as early as possible.
- I really want students to prepare for the presentation as early as possible.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)