【No. 0746】New Year's Holiday
Jan 2, 2017 19:24
Today I spent slow-paced time with my family.
First I took a shower, had a breakfast, then played with my nephew and niece.
After that, I did my work of university until around evening, then my family went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
I ate yakiniku after a long time, and it was delicious and satisfying.
Although it is almost night in Japan, I will go back to the area where I am working to avoid a major traffic jam.
I will be careful not to fall asleep and cause a traffic accident.
First I took a shower, had a breakfast, then played with my nephew and niece.
After that, I did my work of university until around evening, then my family went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
I ate yakiniku after a long time, and it was delicious and satisfying.
Although it is almost night in Japan, I will go back to the area where I am working to avoid a major traffic jam.
I will be careful not to fall asleep and cause a traffic accident.
正月休み
今日は一日、ゆっくりと過ごしました。
まずシャワーを浴び、朝ごはんを食べ、甥っ子と姪っ子と遊びました。
お昼から夕方までは大学の仕事をして、夕飯は私の家族と義兄の家族で焼肉を食べに行きました。
久しぶりの焼肉は美味しく、とても満足しました。
もうすぐ夜ですが、渋滞を避けるためにこれから私の働いている地域に戻ろうと思います。
眠って事故を起こさないように気をつけます。
今日は一日、ゆっくりと過ごしました。
まずシャワーを浴び、朝ごはんを食べ、甥っ子と姪っ子と遊びました。
お昼から夕方までは大学の仕事をして、夕飯は私の家族と義兄の家族で焼肉を食べに行きました。
久しぶりの焼肉は美味しく、とても満足しました。
もうすぐ夜ですが、渋滞を避けるためにこれから私の働いている地域に戻ろうと思います。
眠って事故を起こさないように気をつけます。
Corrections (2)
No. 1 youyahoo
- Today I spent slow-paced time with my family.
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Today I spent a slow-paced day with my family.
I think you mean just a slow/relaxing time, ya? If so, then use that correction
- First I took a shower, had a breakfast, then played with my nephew and niece.
- First, I took a shower and had breakfast, then played with my nephew and niece.
- After that, I did my work of university until around evening, then my family went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
- After that, I did my university work until around evening, then my family went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
- I ate yakiniku after a long time, and it was delicious and satisfying.
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It has been a while since I ate yakiniku, and it was delicious and satisfying.
I am not sure if you havn't ate yakiniku in a while or it just took you long to eat it
- Although it is almost night in Japan, I will go back to the area where I am working to avoid a major traffic jam.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I will be careful not to fall asleep and cause a traffic accident.
- I will be careful not to fall asleep, in order to avoid causing a traffic accident.
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections!
> I am not sure if you havn't ate yakiniku in a while or it just took you long to eat it
Sorry for my confusing English.
I wanted to say the former -- "I haven't eaten yakiniku in a while."
Thank you so much for the corrections!
> I am not sure if you havn't ate yakiniku in a while or it just took you long to eat it
Sorry for my confusing English.
I wanted to say the former -- "I haven't eaten yakiniku in a while."
No. 2 IrishAlex
- Today I spent slow-paced time with my family.
- Today I spent some quality time with my family.
- After that, I did my work of university until around evening, then my family went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
- After that, I did my work for the university until the evening, then my family and I went to a yakiniku shop (beef barbecue restaurant) to eat dinner with my brother's family.
- I ate yakiniku after a long time, and it was delicious and satisfying.
- I hadn't eaten yakiniku for a long time, and it was delicious and satisfying.
- Although it is almost night in Japan, I will go back to the area where I am working to avoid a major traffic jam.
- Although it is almost night in Japan, I will go back to the area where I work to avoid any major traffic jam.
- I will be careful not to fall asleep and cause a traffic accident.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)