【No. 0523】Encounter with a Cockroach
May 24, 2016 21:17
It was when I was leaving a fast food restaurant after I ate dinner, I found a cockroach in the outside.
It was very shocking to me.
I've never found cockroaches while living in Nagano Prefecture, and I met a cockroach for the first time in nine years.
For now, I've never found cockroach in my apartment, but my room doesn't clean very much.
I think that my kitchen is very clean (because I don't cook very much), but there are many cardboard boxes in my room.
Also, I heard that cockroaches like cardboard, and they often deposit their eggs in cardboard boxes.
In order to avoid cockroaches, I will do something with those cardboard boxes.
It was very shocking to me.
I've never found cockroaches while living in Nagano Prefecture, and I met a cockroach for the first time in nine years.
For now, I've never found cockroach in my apartment, but my room doesn't clean very much.
I think that my kitchen is very clean (because I don't cook very much), but there are many cardboard boxes in my room.
Also, I heard that cockroaches like cardboard, and they often deposit their eggs in cardboard boxes.
In order to avoid cockroaches, I will do something with those cardboard boxes.
ゴキブリとの遭遇
昨夜、ファストフード店で夕食を食べて帰ろうとしたら、店の外でゴキブリを見つけました。
とても衝撃的でした。
長野県に住んでいたときは全く見なかったので、およそ9年ぶりにごきぶりと遭遇したことになります。
今のところ私のアパートにはまだゴキブリが出ていませんが、あまり綺麗でもありません。
私の部屋はキッチン回りは綺麗ですが（ほとんど料理をしないので）、ダンボールなどが多いです。
そしてゴキブリは、ダンボールが好きだそうで、ダンボール内に卵を産んだりするそうです。
ゴキブリが出ないように、しっかりと部屋をダンボールを片付けようと思います。
昨夜、ファストフード店で夕食を食べて帰ろうとしたら、店の外でゴキブリを見つけました。
とても衝撃的でした。
長野県に住んでいたときは全く見なかったので、およそ9年ぶりにごきぶりと遭遇したことになります。
今のところ私のアパートにはまだゴキブリが出ていませんが、あまり綺麗でもありません。
私の部屋はキッチン回りは綺麗ですが（ほとんど料理をしないので）、ダンボールなどが多いです。
そしてゴキブリは、ダンボールが好きだそうで、ダンボール内に卵を産んだりするそうです。
ゴキブリが出ないように、しっかりと部屋をダンボールを片付けようと思います。
Corrections (1)
No. 1 kyles272
- It was when I was leaving a fast food restaurant after I ate dinner, I found a cockroach in the outside.
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I was leaving a fast food restaurant right after I ate dinner, and I saw a cockroach outside.
I removed "it was" because it seemed un-needed.
I corrected it to "right after" to show how quickly you would have spotted the cockroach, as if it were right outside the door.
- It was very shocking to me.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I've never found cockroaches while living in Nagano Prefecture, and I met a cockroach for the first time in nine years.
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I've never seen cockroaches while living in Nagano Prefecture, and today I saw a cockroach for the first time in nine years.
I corrected it to saw a cockroach as I wasn't sure if you were actually MEETING a cockroach, as if it were in front of you, or saw as in it was crawling up a wall.
- For now, I've never found cockroach in my apartment, but my room doesn't clean very much.
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For now, I've never found cockroach in my apartment, but I don't clean my room much.
I removed "my room doesn't clean very much," as your room isn't a thing that can clean itself. You're the one who would clean it.
- I think that my kitchen is very clean (because I don't cook very much), but there are many cardboard boxes in my room.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Also, I heard that cockroaches like cardboard, and they often deposit their eggs in cardboard boxes.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In order to avoid cockroaches, I will do something with those cardboard boxes.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
> I corrected it to saw a cockroach as I wasn't sure if you were actually MEETING a cockroach, as if it were in front of you, or saw as in it was crawling up a wall.
The cockroach was crawling on the ground, and I just saw it, so I think the word "saw" is more appropriate. Thank you :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
> I corrected it to saw a cockroach as I wasn't sure if you were actually MEETING a cockroach, as if it were in front of you, or saw as in it was crawling up a wall.
The cockroach was crawling on the ground, and I just saw it, so I think the word "saw" is more appropriate. Thank you :)