【No. 0522】Shopping for Clothes
May 23, 2016 17:53
Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.
It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
I think it's the first in 2 years.
I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
I think it's the first in 2 years.
I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
服の買い物
昨日は、研究を終えた後、アウトレットモールに行って服を買いました。
自分のために服を選び、そして買うのはとても久しぶりです。
約２年ぶりだと思います。
薄手のジャケットやシャツ、パンツなどを買いました。
最近ずっと同じ服ばかり着回していたので、良い気分転換になりそうです。
周りからは、「あの人いつも同じような服着てる」と思われていたかもしれません（笑）
昨日は、研究を終えた後、アウトレットモールに行って服を買いました。
自分のために服を選び、そして買うのはとても久しぶりです。
約２年ぶりだと思います。
薄手のジャケットやシャツ、パンツなどを買いました。
最近ずっと同じ服ばかり着回していたので、良い気分転換になりそうです。
周りからは、「あの人いつも同じような服着てる」と思われていたかもしれません（笑）
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Amy
- Shopping for Clothes
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.
- Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished work.
- It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
- It's been a while since I chose and bought an outfit for myself.
- I think it's the first in 2 years.
- I think that it's the first time in 2 years.
- I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
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I bought a thin jacket, some shirts and pants.
You cannot have two ands
- Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
- Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so these new clothes will be a refreshing change for me.
- My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
- My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same clothes," haha.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 マーセル
- Shopping for Clothes
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.
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Yesterday after work I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes.
Bit more clear when you put all the time descriptors next to each other.
- It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
- It's been a while since I last bought myself clothes.
- Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
- Recently, I've been wearing very few clothes or a rotational basis, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
- My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
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My colleagues might have thought something like "you're always wearing the same clothes" haha.
Just an alternative, makes the sentence sound a bit more casual for some reason (maybe because present continuous isn't TECHNICALLY the best tense for this sentence).
Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 Lirah
- It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
- It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth clothes for myself.
- I think it's the first in 2 years.
- I think it's the first time in over 2 years.
- I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
- I bought a thin jacket, and, some shirts, and some pants.
- Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
- Recently, I've worn a few the new clothes in rotation. so such new These clothes will be a good are such a refreshing change for me.
- My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
- My colleagues might have thought something like "you start to think that I always wear the same cloth," clothes. haha.
Toru
Thank you so much for your corrections! :)
Thank you so much for your corrections! :)