【No. 0498】The Death of My Grandfather
Apr 29, 2016 14:06
Yesterday, I received a sad news.
My grandfather (my mother's father) passed away.
Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
He was a Christian, and he seem to be in heaven.
I heard that death is the beginning of eternal life, and is not a sad thing for Christians.
However, I think that most people will feel sad more than a little if their familiar person pass away.
I want to pray for his soul to rest in peace
My grandfather (my mother's father) passed away.
Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
He was a Christian, and he seem to be in heaven.
I heard that death is the beginning of eternal life, and is not a sad thing for Christians.
However, I think that most people will feel sad more than a little if their familiar person pass away.
I want to pray for his soul to rest in peace
祖父の死
昨日、訃報がありました。
私の祖父（私の母の父）がお亡くなりになりました。
母方の祖父は、離れた場所に住んでいて、頻繁に会うことはできませんでした。
もっと会っておけばよかったと、思います。
クリスチャンの彼は今、天国にいるそうです。
クリスチャンにとって、死は永遠の命の始まりであり、悲しいことではないと聞きました。
しかし、親しい人の死は、どうしても悲しい気持ちになってしまうと思います。
安らかな眠りをお祈りしています。
昨日、訃報がありました。
私の祖父（私の母の父）がお亡くなりになりました。
母方の祖父は、離れた場所に住んでいて、頻繁に会うことはできませんでした。
もっと会っておけばよかったと、思います。
クリスチャンの彼は今、天国にいるそうです。
クリスチャンにとって、死は永遠の命の始まりであり、悲しいことではないと聞きました。
しかし、親しい人の死は、どうしても悲しい気持ちになってしまうと思います。
安らかな眠りをお祈りしています。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Kendra
- Yesterday, I received a sad news.
- Yesterday, I received a sad news.
- Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
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Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
Since you already told what side of the family your grandfather was on, you don't need to say it again. I hope this helped! ^^
- I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
- I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
- However, I think that most people will feel sad more than a little if their familiar person pass away.
- However, I think that most people will feel very sad if someone close to them passes away.
I'm really sorry to hear about your grandfather.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post.
I appreciate your kind words.
Thank you so much for correcting my post.
I appreciate your kind words.
Kendra
You're welcome :)
You're welcome :)
No. 2
- The Death of My Grandfather
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Yesterday, I received a sad news.
- Yesterday, I received a sad news.
- My grandfather (my mother's father) passed away.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
- Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't mseet him frequently.
- I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
- I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
- He was a Christian, and he seem to be in heaven.
- He was a Christian, and he seems to be in heaven.
- I heard that death is the beginning of eternal life, and is not a sad thing for Christians.
- I heard that death is the beginning of eternal life, and it is not a sad thing for Christians.
- However, I think that most people will feel sad more than a little if their familiar person pass away.
- However, I think that most people will feel sad morder than a little if their familiar person pass away.
- I want to pray for his soul to rest in peace
- I want to pray for his soul to rest in peace.
I'm sorry for your loss.
I hope your grandfather has reached the light.
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post.
I'm grateful for your tender words.
Thank you very much for correcting my post.
I'm grateful for your tender words.
No. 3 Oanh Nguyen
- The Death of My Grandfather
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Yesterday, I received a sad news.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- My grandfather (my mother's father) passed away.
- My grandfather (my mother's father/mother's side) passed away.
- Since my grandfather on my mother's side lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
- Since he lived in a remote location, I couldn't meet him frequently.
- I think that I should have met to him at short intervals.
- I think that I should meet him for a short interval.
- He was a Christian, and he seem to be in heaven.
- He was a Christian, and he seems to be in heaven.
- I heard that death is the beginning of eternal life, and is not a sad thing for Christians.
- I've heard that Death is beginning of eternal life, not a sad thing for Christians.
- However, I think that most people will feel sad more than a little if their familiar person pass away.
- However, I think that most people will feel a little sad when their familiar person passes away.
- I want to pray for his soul to rest in peace
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post.
Thank you so much for correcting my post.