【No. 0494】My First Paycheck
Apr 25, 2016 20:56
Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.
I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.
I was deeply moved.
Maybe I was smirking.
I'm not sure what I should use my.
First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.
After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.
Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.
Hehehe.
I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.
I was deeply moved.
Maybe I was smirking.
I'm not sure what I should use my.
First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.
After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.
Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.
Hehehe.
初給料
今日は、待ちに待った初めてのお給料日です。
恐る恐るATMで通帳の残高を確認したら、無事振り込まれていました。
感動です。
顔がにやけます。
初給料で何をしようか迷います。
まず、ゴールデンウィークに、両親にご飯をごちそうして、贈り物をしようと思います。
それから、お世話になった指導教員の先生にもご飯をごちそうしたいです。
最後に、自分のために新しいパソコンとiPadが欲しいです。
へへへ。
今日は、待ちに待った初めてのお給料日です。
恐る恐るATMで通帳の残高を確認したら、無事振り込まれていました。
感動です。
顔がにやけます。
初給料で何をしようか迷います。
まず、ゴールデンウィークに、両親にご飯をごちそうして、贈り物をしようと思います。
それから、お世話になった指導教員の先生にもご飯をごちそうしたいです。
最後に、自分のために新しいパソコンとiPadが欲しいです。
へへへ。
Corrections (2)
No. 1 メラメラ丸
その感動、まだ覚えています！やったね。ところで、ここで「やったね」と言ってなんか変ですね（笑）
ご両親にご飯をごちそうするのがおすすめです。私は初めて給料をもらった後、おばあちゃんに履き心地の良い靴をプレゼントしました。おばあちゃんがとても嬉しそうに見えました。
Toru
スイちゃん、コメントありがとうございます :)
やりました（笑）
靴のプレゼント、いいですね～。
もうすぐ母の日、父の日なので、私も何かプレゼントを考えます。
スイちゃん、コメントありがとうございます :)
やりました（笑）
靴のプレゼント、いいですね～。
もうすぐ母の日、父の日なので、私も何かプレゼントを考えます。
No. 2 Kwang Ming (クアン ミン）
- Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.
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Today, for the first time in my life, is my long-awaited payday.
More interesting and clearer.
- I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I was deeply moved.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Maybe I was smirking.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I'm not sure what I should use my.
- I'm not sure how I should spend it.
- First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.
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To start it off, I will buy dinner and gifts for my parents during next Golden Week holidays.
If you only have a single parent, then you can change gifts and parents to singular.
- After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.
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After that, I'd like to treat my mentor who taught me at the university.
treat = buy lunch or dinner but informal
- Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Hehehe.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Money makes the world go round huh? Especially our world. =) Congrats!
Toru
Thank you so much always for correcting my post!
> Money makes the world go round huh?
You bet! By the way, we call it "金は天下の回り物."
Thank you so much always for correcting my post!
> Money makes the world go round huh?
You bet! By the way, we call it "金は天下の回り物."