【No. 0470】My New Post
Apr 1, 2016 22:57
Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty of a university.
First, I received a letter of appointment, then participated in a workshop for new teachers.
After that, I participated in a faculty meeting and a drinking party.
This party was held as a welcome party of new teachers.
I drank a lot and ate dishes while talking with various teachers.
I tasted also delicious wine.
I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
I will do my best in this university.
First, I received a letter of appointment, then participated in a workshop for new teachers.
After that, I participated in a faculty meeting and a drinking party.
This party was held as a welcome party of new teachers.
I drank a lot and ate dishes while talking with various teachers.
I tasted also delicious wine.
I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
I will do my best in this university.
着任
今日は大学の教員として、ついに就任しました。
まずは辞令交付を終え、研修会に参加しました。
それから教授会に参加し、後は飲み会です。
この飲み会は、新任の先生の歓迎会として開催されました。
多くの先生と会話しながら、ご飯を食べ、お酒をいっぱい飲みました。
美味しいワインも頂きました。
素敵な先生たちばかりで、とても恵まれていると感じました。
この大学でこれから頑張ります。
今日は大学の教員として、ついに就任しました。
まずは辞令交付を終え、研修会に参加しました。
それから教授会に参加し、後は飲み会です。
この飲み会は、新任の先生の歓迎会として開催されました。
多くの先生と会話しながら、ご飯を食べ、お酒をいっぱい飲みました。
美味しいワインも頂きました。
素敵な先生たちばかりで、とても恵まれていると感じました。
この大学でこれから頑張ります。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Wendy
- I tasted also delicious wine.
- I also tasted delicious wine.
- I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
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I feel that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
'Felt' is past tense, and 'I'm' is present tense. Keep the tense the same in a sentence.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Dave Co
- Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty of a university.
- Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty in the university.
- First, I received a letter of appointment, then participated in a workshop for new teachers.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- After that, I participated in a faculty meeting and a drinking party.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- This party was held as a welcome party of new teachers.
- This party was held as a welcome party for new teachers.
- I drank a lot and ate dishes while talking with various teachers.
- I drank a lot and ate food while talking with various teachers.
- I tasted also delicious wine.
- I also tasted delicious wine.
- I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I will do my best in this university.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
おめでとうございます:D
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment!
ありがとうございます (^^)
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment!
ありがとうございます (^^)
No. 3 thethinker83
Best of luck to you! :)
Toru
Thank you for the nice comment! (^^)
Thank you for the nice comment! (^^)