【No. 0444】Standing Desk
Mar 6, 2016 10:44
In recent years, doing desk work while standing up has got a lot of attention.
By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation of your feet.
Also, you can continue to concentrate, and won't become sleepy.
Of course it will make you tired, but you also will divide your break from your work sharply.
On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulder, because of decline of muscle for supporting your hip.
Furthermore, they have higher risks about heart disease due to poor circulation and diabetes due to insulin decrease.
I might consider a purchase of a standing desk for my new workplace.
By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation of your feet.
Also, you can continue to concentrate, and won't become sleepy.
Of course it will make you tired, but you also will divide your break from your work sharply.
On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulder, because of decline of muscle for supporting your hip.
Furthermore, they have higher risks about heart disease due to poor circulation and diabetes due to insulin decrease.
I might consider a purchase of a standing desk for my new workplace.
スタンディングデスク
近年、立ちながらデスクワークをすることが注目を浴びています。
常に立つことで、姿勢が良くなり、足の血行も良くなるそうです。
また、常に集中力が保たれ、眠くなりません。
立つことで当然疲れますが、作業と休憩の間にメリハリが生まれるとも言われています。
一方、長時間座る人は、腰を支える筋が衰え、腰痛や肩こりになりやすいそうです。
また、血行不良による心臓病や、インスリン減少による糖尿病のリスクが上昇するようです。
私も来月からの新しい職場では、スタンディングデスクを検討してみようと思います。
近年、立ちながらデスクワークをすることが注目を浴びています。
常に立つことで、姿勢が良くなり、足の血行も良くなるそうです。
また、常に集中力が保たれ、眠くなりません。
立つことで当然疲れますが、作業と休憩の間にメリハリが生まれるとも言われています。
一方、長時間座る人は、腰を支える筋が衰え、腰痛や肩こりになりやすいそうです。
また、血行不良による心臓病や、インスリン減少による糖尿病のリスクが上昇するようです。
私も来月からの新しい職場では、スタンディングデスクを検討してみようと思います。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Hope
- Standing Desk
- Standing at your Desk
- In recent years, doing desk work while standing up has got a lot of attention.
- In recent years, doing work at a desk while standing up has gotten a lot of attention.
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation of your feet.
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation. of your feet.
- Also, you can continue to concentrate, and won't become sleepy.
- Also, you can maintain concentration, and you won't become sleepy.
- Of course it will make you tired, but you also will divide your break from your work sharply.
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Of course it will make you tired, but you also will divide your break from your work sharply. ??
I don't understand this sentence
- On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulder, because of decline of muscle for supporting your hip.
- On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulders, because of the lack of muscles supporting your hip.
- Furthermore, they have higher risks about heart disease due to poor circulation and diabetes due to insulin decrease.
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Furthermore, people who sit for a long time have a higher risk of getting heart disease due to poor circulation, and they risk getting diabetes due to insulin decrease.
This whole sentence is quite messy - I would try breaking it up into two different sentences
- I might consider a purchase of a standing desk for my new workplace.
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I might consider purchasing a standing desk for my new workplace.
I think your employer/company should have to pay for the desk, not you.
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections and the explanations! :)
Thank you so much for the corrections and the explanations! :)
No. 2 Shin
- In recent years, doing desk work while standing up has got a lot of attention.
- In recent years, doing desk work while standing up has gotten a lot of attention.
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation of your feet.
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and the blood circulation of your feet.
- Also, you can continue to concentrate, and won't become sleepy.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Of course it will make you tired, but you also will divide your break from your work sharply.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulder, because of decline of muscle for supporting your hip.
- On the other hand, people who sit for a long time every day seem to have back pain and stiff shoulders, because of the decline of the muscle supporting your hip.
- Furthermore, they have higher risks about heart disease due to poor circulation and diabetes due to insulin decrease.
- Furthermore, they have higher risks of heart disease due to poor circulation, and diabetes due to insulin decrease.
- I might consider a purchase of a standing desk for my new workplace.
- I might consider purchasing a standing desk for my new workplace.
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 kou
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation of your feet.
- By standing up constantly, you can improve your posture and blood circulation to your feet.
good sentences ;-)
good job :-)
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
kou
hi there ;-) It's my pleasure :-)
hi there ;-) It's my pleasure :-)