【No. 0441】Year-End Accomplishment Report Meeting
Mar 3, 2016 21:51
Today, I conducted the accomplishment report of my venture activity at the year-end meeting.
Since this presentation was the compilation of my student life, I was a little nervous, but it went smoothly.
In the social gathering, I presented commemorative gifts to teachers and staffs who supported me, and conveyed to them my sincere appreciation.
When I saw one of them had tearful eyes, I almost cried too.
Also, many of them gave me words of encouragement, so I was impressed.
I'd like to push forward confidently toward my new goal.
Since this presentation was the compilation of my student life, I was a little nervous, but it went smoothly.
In the social gathering, I presented commemorative gifts to teachers and staffs who supported me, and conveyed to them my sincere appreciation.
When I saw one of them had tearful eyes, I almost cried too.
Also, many of them gave me words of encouragement, so I was impressed.
I'd like to push forward confidently toward my new goal.
年度末成果報告会
今日はベンチャー活動の年度末の成果報告を行いました。
これまでの私の課外活動の集大成なので、少し緊張しましたが、無事終わりました。
そして懇親会では、これまでお世話になった先生や職員の方に、記念品をプレゼントし、感謝の気持ちを伝えました。
中には涙目になって頂いた方もいて、私も泣きそうになりました。
そして、多くの方から激励の言葉をもらい、とても感動しました。
来年度以降も邁進していきたいです。
今日はベンチャー活動の年度末の成果報告を行いました。
これまでの私の課外活動の集大成なので、少し緊張しましたが、無事終わりました。
そして懇親会では、これまでお世話になった先生や職員の方に、記念品をプレゼントし、感謝の気持ちを伝えました。
中には涙目になって頂いた方もいて、私も泣きそうになりました。
そして、多くの方から激励の言葉をもらい、とても感動しました。
来年度以降も邁進していきたいです。
Corrections (1)
No. 1 烏
- In the social gathering, I presented commemorative gifts to teachers and staffs who supported me, and conveyed to them my sincere appreciation.
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In the social gathering, I presented commemorative gifts to teachers and staffs who supported me, and conveyed to them my sincerest appreciation.
The word "staff" has no plural.
- When I saw one of them had tearful eyes, I almost cried too.
- When I saw that one of them had tearful eyes, I almost cried too.
- Also, many of them gave me words of encouragement, so I was impressed.
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Also, many of them gave me words of encouragement, so I was impressed.
Not really a correction but, the word "impressed" here carry's a different nuance. Perhaps, "I was moved" would be better?
- I'd like to push forward confidently toward my new goal.
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I'd like to confidently push forward towards my new goal.
Putting "confidently" before the verb "push" sounds more natural.
Overall, pretty good. :)
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm glad to hear you say that :)
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm glad to hear you say that :)
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You're welcome. 😊
You're welcome. 😊