【No. 0381】Homecoming
Jan 3, 2016 23:29
Today, I was return home because I could pack up my work.
I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama.
Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother and my brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
Actually my mother and I didn't watch episode 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it to us.
I am a little tired today.
Good night.
I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama.
Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother and my brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
Actually my mother and I didn't watch episode 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it to us.
I am a little tired today.
Good night.
帰省
今日は仕事が一段落ついたので実家に帰省しました。
夕方に家につき、甥っ子と姪っ子にお年玉として New Nintendo 3DS をプレゼントしました。
それから家族で夕飯を食べ、母と義兄とスターウォーズエピソード7を観に行きました。
実は私はエピソード4〜6を観ていなかったのですが、楽しかったです。
よくわからないところは、義兄が解説してくれました。
今日は疲れたのでもう寝ます。
おやすみなさい。
今日は仕事が一段落ついたので実家に帰省しました。
夕方に家につき、甥っ子と姪っ子にお年玉として New Nintendo 3DS をプレゼントしました。
それから家族で夕飯を食べ、母と義兄とスターウォーズエピソード7を観に行きました。
実は私はエピソード4〜6を観ていなかったのですが、楽しかったです。
よくわからないところは、義兄が解説してくれました。
今日は疲れたのでもう寝ます。
おやすみなさい。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Amanda
- Today, I was return home because I could pack up my work.
- Today, I returned home to pack up my work.
- I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama.
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I arrived home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as a present.
プレゼント = present
- Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother and my brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
- We ate dinner, and after that my mother, my brother-in-law and I went to watch Episode 7 of Star Wars.
- Actually my mother and I didn't watch episode 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it to us.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I am a little tired today.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Good night.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 thethinker83
- Today, I was return home because I could pack up my work.
- Today, I was returned home because I could pack up completed a (significant) phase of my work.
- I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama.
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I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a new Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama (New Year's gifts).
In general, I recommend providing translations for Japanese words that might be unfamiliar to non-native speakers.
- Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother and my brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Actually my mother and I didn't watch episode 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
- Actually, my mother and I didn't watch episodes 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
- There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it to us.
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There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it them to us.
edited for consistency in number (parts --> them)
- I am a little tired today.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Good night.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
I enjoyed the new Star Wars movie too. I watched it at the only IMAX theater with a 4K laser projector in New England. :)
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and explanations! :)
Wow, the IMAX theater with a 4K laser projector sounds so fantastic. I really want to the theater someday.
Thank you very much for the corrections and explanations! :)
Wow, the IMAX theater with a 4K laser projector sounds so fantastic. I really want to the theater someday.
thethinker83
There are only eight of these theaters in the entire world. Maybe there is one in Japan? :)
There are only eight of these theaters in the entire world. Maybe there is one in Japan? :)
Toru
Eight?! The number is really small... You're right, according to the Internet, one of them seems to be located in Osaka. I will visit Osaka in next September to participate in an academic conference, so I will reserve a ticket of the theater at that time, hehe.
Eight?! The number is really small... You're right, according to the Internet, one of them seems to be located in Osaka. I will visit Osaka in next September to participate in an academic conference, so I will reserve a ticket of the theater at that time, hehe.
No. 3 outdoors
- Today, I was return home because I could pack up my work.
- Today, I was returned to my hometown because I could pack was able to finish up my work.
- I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama.
- I arrived at my home in the evening, and gave my nephew and niece a New Nintendo 3DS as otoshidama (new year's gift).
- Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother and my brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
- Then we ate dinner, and after that, my mother (and my) brother-in-law and I went to watch Star Wars Episode 7.
- Actually my mother and I didn't watch episode 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
- Actually my mother and I didn't watch had never seen episodes 4, 5, and 6, but we really enjoyed it.
- There were some difficult parts to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it to us.
- There were some parts that were difficult to understand, but my brother-in-law explained it them to us.
- I am a little tired today.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D