【No. 0368】Cheetah and Zebra
Dec 21, 2015 12:08
In Yokohama Zoo "Zoorasia," cheetahs and zebras are living in the same area.
Since cheetahs are carnivores, you might think cheetahs would attack zebras.
However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than cheetahs.
In fact, zebras seems to be more strong than cheetahs.
By the way, lions are living in a different area.
Since cheetahs are carnivores, you might think cheetahs would attack zebras.
However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than cheetahs.
In fact, zebras seems to be more strong than cheetahs.
By the way, lions are living in a different area.
チーターとシマウマ
よこはま動物園ズーラシアでは、チーターとシマウマが同じエリアで生活しています。
チーターは肉食動物なので、草食動物のシマウマを襲うと思うかもしれません。
しかしチーターは自分よりも体が大きい相手を襲わない性質があるため、問題はありません。
実際、シマウマはチーターよりも強いそうです。
ちなみに、ライオンは違うエリアで生活しています。
よこはま動物園ズーラシアでは、チーターとシマウマが同じエリアで生活しています。
チーターは肉食動物なので、草食動物のシマウマを襲うと思うかもしれません。
しかしチーターは自分よりも体が大きい相手を襲わない性質があるため、問題はありません。
実際、シマウマはチーターよりも強いそうです。
ちなみに、ライオンは違うエリアで生活しています。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Oceansea
- In Yokohama Zoo "Zoorasia," cheetahs and zebras are living in the same area.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Since cheetahs are carnivores, you might think cheetahs would attack zebras.
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Since cheetahs are carnivores, you might think that the cheetahs would attack the zebras.
The sentence as written is okay, but it sounds generic. It could be talking about any cheetahs anywhere. The blue words make the sentence more specific to the cheetahs and zebras in the zoo that you mentioned in the last sentence.
You could also say "cheetahs are carnivorous," which is another form of the word "carnivore."
- However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than cheetahs.
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However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than the cheetah's.
It might be easier to say:
"However... ...don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than theirs."
- In fact, zebras seems to be more strong than cheetahs.
- In fact, zebras seems to be more strong stronger than cheetahs.
- By the way, lions are living in a different area.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Shannon
- In Yokohama Zoo "Zoorasia," cheetahs and zebras are living in the same area.
- In Yokohama Zoo "Zoorasia," cheetahs and zebras live in the same area.
- However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than cheetahs.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In fact, zebras seems to be more strong than cheetahs.
- In fact, zebras seem to be more stronger than cheetahs.
- By the way, lions are living in a different area.
- By the way, lions live in a different area.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 Timmy
- However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores whose bodies are bigger than cheetahs.
- However, there is no problem because cheetahs don't attack herbivores bigger than its (own) size.
Interesting! Nature is more complicated than it seems.
Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Yes, it is more complex and more interesting than most people realize. :)
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Yes, it is more complex and more interesting than most people realize. :)
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
>Yes, it is more complex and more interesting than most people realize. :)
That's for sure^_^
You're welcome!^_^
>Yes, it is more complex and more interesting than most people realize. :)
That's for sure^_^