【No. 0334】10K Day
Nov 17, 2015 13:09
Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?
The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
生誕10000日記念
生誕10000日目がいつかを考えたことがありますか？
それは27歳になってから、4ヶ月と16日ほど後にやってきます。
私は去年、いつの間にか過ぎていました。
あまりこの日を意識している人は多くないと思います。
恋人や友人にサプライズを仕掛ければ、きっと大成功するでしょう。
結婚10000日記念などでも大成功することと思います。
生誕10000日目がいつかを考えたことがありますか？
それは27歳になってから、4ヶ月と16日ほど後にやってきます。
私は去年、いつの間にか過ぎていました。
あまりこの日を意識している人は多くないと思います。
恋人や友人にサプライズを仕掛ければ、きっと大成功するでしょう。
結婚10000日記念などでも大成功することと思います。
Corrections (3)
No. 1 Aiumi
- Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
- The day, which you might call the 10K day, will come 4 months and 16 days after you turn 27.
- In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
- I don't think there are many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
- Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
- Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
- I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
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I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage.
'would' sounds a little better than 'will' here, but this sentence is okay.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 デクラン
- 10K Day
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
- The day, which you might call 10K Day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from your 27th birthday
- In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
- In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
- I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
- I don't think there are many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
- Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
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Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your boyfriends, girlfriends or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
'Lovers' in't wrong, I just don't like the word. It sounds a little weird, haha
- I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
- I think celebrating the 10 thousandth day from your marriage will also be a great success
The ten thousandth day after my birth will be June 1st 2024! Only 9 and half years to go, haha
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
It sounds like a long time, my ten years passed all too soon!
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
It sounds like a long time, my ten years passed all too soon!
No. 3 Timmy
- Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
- Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lover (or: significant other) or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
Interesting! The number looks scary though))
Toru
Thank you so much always for correcting my post! :)
Haha, it's also scary for me.
Thank you so much always for correcting my post! :)
Haha, it's also scary for me.
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
You're welcome!^_^