【No. 0258】Equipment Exhibition
Sep 2, 2015 19:13
Today, I went to a large scale equipment exhibition held in Tokyo.
I could learn about state-of-the-art analysis equipments and inspection technologies.
In addition, since I could network with various companies, it was a really productive day.
However, Tokyo was very hot and humid, and there were too many people.
I always get a headache when I come to Tokyo.
I hardly want to relax at the countryside.
I could learn about state-of-the-art analysis equipments and inspection technologies.
In addition, since I could network with various companies, it was a really productive day.
However, Tokyo was very hot and humid, and there were too many people.
I always get a headache when I come to Tokyo.
I hardly want to relax at the countryside.
今日は、東京で開催された大規模な機器展示会に行ってきました。
最先端の分析装置や検査技術を知ることができました。
さらに、様々な企業の方と情報交換することができて、とても充実した日となりました。
ただ、東京はすごく蒸し暑くて、人が多すぎます。
私は東京に来ると、必ず頭が痛くなります。
田舎に戻ってゆっくりと休みたいです。
最先端の分析装置や検査技術を知ることができました。
さらに、様々な企業の方と情報交換することができて、とても充実した日となりました。
ただ、東京はすごく蒸し暑くて、人が多すぎます。
私は東京に来ると、必ず頭が痛くなります。
田舎に戻ってゆっくりと休みたいです。
Corrections (1)
No. 1 デクラン
- Today, I went to a large scale equipment exhibition held in Tokyo.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I could learn about state-of-the-art analysis equipments and inspection technologies.
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I was able to learn about state-of-the-art analysis equipment and inspection technologies.
'equipment' is already plural, so it doesn't need an 's'.
- In addition, since I could network with various companies, it was a really productive day.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, Tokyo was very hot and humid, and there were too many people.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I always get a headache when I come to Tokyo.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I hardly want to relax at the countryside.
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I really want to relax at the countryside.
'I hardly want to (do something)' means you don't want to do it. I assume you meant you wanted to relax in the countryside, since Tokyo gives you a headache. If you meant that you don't like the countryside though, this sentence is perfect.
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Also, thank you for guessing what I wanted to mean.
Actually, I wanted to write something like "I hardly wait to relax..." haha.
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I really want to relax at the countryside.
'I hardly want to (do something)' means you don't want to do it. I assume you meant you wanted to relax in the countryside, since Tokyo gives you a headache. If you meant that you don't like the countryside though, this sentence is perfect.
Also, thank you for guessing what I wanted to mean.
Actually, I wanted to write something like "I hardly wait to relax..." haha.
デクラン
Oh! In that case, 'I can hardly wait to (do something)' is the proper phrase. It's like you're really excited to relax to in the countryside ^_^
Oh! In that case, 'I can hardly wait to (do something)' is the proper phrase. It's like you're really excited to relax to in the countryside ^_^
Toru
Thank you for the correction! I was able to relax! :D
Thank you for the correction! I was able to relax! :D