【No. 0251】Cycling with My Friends
Aug 26, 2015 16:54
In this morning, I went to cycling with my friends.
The distance to the destination was about 40 km.
We ate brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
I ate Kamameshi, which is the famous menu in the land.
There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
However, I don't know why an apricot was also put on the rice.
Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
I am somewhat tired, but it was fun.
The distance to the destination was about 40 km.
We ate brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
I ate Kamameshi, which is the famous menu in the land.
There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
However, I don't know why an apricot was also put on the rice.
Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
I am somewhat tired, but it was fun.
友人とサイクリング
今日の午前、友人とサイクリングに行きました。
片道40km程で、ブランチを食べて昼ごろに戻ってきました。
私は、その土地で有名な釜飯を食べました。
ご飯の上に卵や椎茸、筍や鶏肉など様々な具が乗っていて美味しかったです。
しかし、杏子が乗っていたのはどうかと思いました。
そして、帰路に向けてエネルギーを蓄えるため、おそばとアイスクリームも食べました。
少し疲れましたが、楽しかったです。
今日の午前、友人とサイクリングに行きました。
片道40km程で、ブランチを食べて昼ごろに戻ってきました。
私は、その土地で有名な釜飯を食べました。
ご飯の上に卵や椎茸、筍や鶏肉など様々な具が乗っていて美味しかったです。
しかし、杏子が乗っていたのはどうかと思いました。
そして、帰路に向けてエネルギーを蓄えるため、おそばとアイスクリームも食べました。
少し疲れましたが、楽しかったです。
Corrections (2)
No. 1 sbsb
- Cycling with My Friends
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In this morning, I went to cycling with my friends.
- This morning, I went cycling with my friends.
- The distance to the destination was about 40 km.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- We ate brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
- We had brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
- I ate Kamameshi, which is the famous menu in the land.
- I ate Kamameshi, which is a famous dish in this area.
- There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
- (In the dish, on top of rice?) There were great variety of ingredients, such as eggs, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken.
- However, I don't know why an apricot was also put on the rice.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
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Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
Maybe a better phrase would be
Furthermore, I had soba and ice cream "to restore my energy".
- I am somewhat tired, but it was fun.
- I am a little tired, but it was fun.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 greenhouse_potterhead
- There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
- The dish is made with a variety of ingredients, such as an eggs, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the and rice.
- Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
- Furthermore I also ate soba and ice cream for storing to get more energy.
That sounds like a nice day! 40KM is a very big distance, good job! :)
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment! :D
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment! :D