【No. 0209】Amazon Prime Day

Jul 15, 2015 16:12

Today is Amazon's prime day, and various goods are being discounted.

I checked them, and I decided to buy some goods, such as a Chromecast, a mouse, and a dryer.

Also, I could get 1000 yen gift points.

I'm now a little happy.

Amazon will sale MacBook Pro at a reduced price at 22:00, and I want to buy it.

However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.

Please give me a chance to buy the MacBook Pro.

Corrections (3)

No. 1　Timmy

• Also, I could get 1000 yen gift points.
• Also, I could get 1000 yen worth of gift points.

• I'm now a little happy.
• I'm a bit happier now.

• However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.
• However, since there are a lot of competition, it's going to be difficult to get (your hands on one).

Nice!

Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting me! :D

Timmy
You are welcome! ^_^

No. 2　シャル❇️

• However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.
• However, since there's a lot of competition, it's going to be difficult to get it.

Did you get it ? ^^

Toru
Thank you so much for correcting me post! :)
Unfortunately I couldn't get it. Instead, I got a 3D printer at 90% off. hehe.

No. 3　Eddie

• Today is Amazon's prime day, and various goods are being discounted.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• I checked them, and I decided to buy some goods, such as a Chromecast, a mouse, and a dryer.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• Amazon will sale MacBook Pro at a reduced price at 22:00, and I want to buy it.
• Amazon will sell MacBook Pro at a reduced price of 22:00, and I want to buy it.

• Please give me a chance to buy the MacBook Pro.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D

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