【No. 0180】ID Photo
Jun 16, 2015 19:17
Today, I had my friend take a photo for my resume.
We firstly used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
Next, we used iPhone 6's camera, and the result was somehow better.
So I decided to use the photo by iPhone.
However, since it was a little dark, I slightly adjusted the brightness.
I believe such a brightness adjustment is OK. Maybe.
We firstly used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
Next, we used iPhone 6's camera, and the result was somehow better.
So I decided to use the photo by iPhone.
However, since it was a little dark, I slightly adjusted the brightness.
I believe such a brightness adjustment is OK. Maybe.
Corrections (2)
No. 1 Willis
- Today, I had my friend take a photo for my resume.
- Today, I had my friend to take a photo for my resume.
- We firstly used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
- Firstly, we used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
- Next, we used iPhone 6's camera, and the result was somehow better.
- Next, we used a iPhone 6's camera and the result was somehow better.
- So I decided to use the photo by iPhone.
- So I decided to use the photo taken by the iPhone.
- I believe such a brightness adjustment is OK.
- I believed such a brightness adjustment is OK.
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Toru
Thank you very much for your corrections and comment!
I have one question.
In the above sentence, I thought 'have' is an causative verb that is used something like "have + someone+ verb." But can(should) I say "have + someone+ to verb?"
- Today, I had my friend to take a photo for my resume.
I have one question.
In the above sentence, I thought 'have' is an causative verb that is used something like "have + someone+ verb." But can(should) I say "have + someone+ to verb?"
Willis
Welcome, I believed @Oceansea has also helped you below.
Yes, you can say in either way. In my context, I think to be much formal and proper, with the "to" makes it sound better.
Welcome, I believed @Oceansea has also helped you below.
Yes, you can say in either way. In my context, I think to be much formal and proper, with the "to" makes it sound better.
Toru
Thank you so much for you useful information! :)
Thank you so much for you useful information! :)
No. 2 Oceansea
- Today, I had my friend take a photo for my resume.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- We firstly used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
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We firstly First we used a single lens reflex camera, but it was not so great.
I think the verb "try" is better than "used" here.
"First we tried a single lens reflex camera..."
We will often say "first I tried this, then I tried that, and so on." It is a good way to show that maybe you did not know which picture would be the best.
- Next, we used iPhone 6's camera, and the result was somehow better.
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Next, we used an iPhone 6's camera, and the result was somehow better.
You can use "try" again here too.
"An iPhone 6's camera"
Note that "a" changed to "an" because "iPhone" starts with a vowel sound.
- So I decided to use the photo by iPhone.
- So I decided to use the iPhone photo by iPhone.
- I believe such a brightness adjustment is OK.
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I believe such a brightness adjustment is okay OK.
"OK" is usually spelled "okay" in writing. "OK" is more like an abbreviation.
Toru
Thank you very much for your informative corrections!
I learned something new. :D
Thank you very much for your informative corrections!
I learned something new. :D