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【No. 0171】Skin Peeling

Jun 7, 2015 16:53
I realized that my skins are peeling.

Because I went to cycling last weekend and got a sunburn.

Now my skins are almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.

I think it looks like creepy.

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No. 1 
  • I realized that my skins are peeling.
  • I realized that my skin is peeling.
  • Because I went to cycling last weekend and got a sunburn.
  • Because I went to cycling last weekend and got had a sunburn.
  • Now my skins are almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.
  • Now my skin is almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.
  • I think it looks like creepy.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D

No problem! :)

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