【No. 0171】Skin Peeling

Jun 7, 2015 16:53

I realized that my skins are peeling.

Because I went to cycling last weekend and got a sunburn.

Now my skins are almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.

I think it looks like creepy.

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No. 1　

• I realized that my skins are peeling.
• I realized that my skin is peeling.

• Because I went to cycling last weekend and got a sunburn.
• Because I went to cycling last weekend and got had a sunburn.

• Now my skins are almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.
• Now my skin is almost totally brown, but the peeled region is pink.

• I think it looks like creepy.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D

No problem! :)

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