【No. 0167】A Rainy Day
Jun 3, 2015 21:15
Since it rained after a long interval, I went to my university by foot.
However, my umbrella was in my laboratory, and I only had a folding umbrella.
Therefore, my shoulders and my shoes got bloody soaked.
I felt a bit blue.
When I came home, the rain had ceased.
It was thankful for small mercies.
However, my umbrella was in my laboratory, and I only had a folding umbrella.
Therefore, my shoulders and my shoes got bloody soaked.
I felt a bit blue.
When I came home, the rain had ceased.
It was thankful for small mercies.
Corrections (1)
No. 1 Lalli
- A Rainy Day
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Since it rained after a long interval, I went to my university by foot.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, my umbrella was in my laboratory, and I only had a folding umbrella.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Therefore, my shoulders and my shoes got bloody soaked.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I felt a bit blue.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- When I came home, the rain had ceased.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It was thankful for small mercies.
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It was thankful for small mercies.
Did you mean "I was thankful for small mercies?"
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
> Did you mean "I was thankful for small mercies?"
Oh, yes. I wanted to say something like that.
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
> Did you mean "I was thankful for small mercies?"
Oh, yes. I wanted to say something like that.