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【No. 0136】Common Cold

May 3, 2015 21:20
Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.

I think I probably caught a cold.

I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
今日は一日中、頭が痛く、喉の調子も変で、気分が悪かったです。

恐らく風邪を引いたのだと思います。

沢山寝て、早く治したいです。

Corrections (4)

No. 1　thethinker83
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.

    I deleted "a" since there is pain in more than one place (head and throat).

  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Take care!

Toru
Thank you so much for your correction and kind comment! :D
No. 2　Timmy

May your recovery be a quick and zippy one!

Toru
Thank you for your comment!
I have completely recovered. :D
Timmy
Good for you!
No. 3　Eddie
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • I think I probably caught a cold.

    It's ok, but a bit redundant. Have only "think" or "probably" in the sentence

  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

お大事に

Toru
Thank you very much for correcting me!
もう元気になりました。(^^)
No. 4　Sunny
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • Today, I have had this pain in my head and throat, and I've felt awful almost all day.
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Get well soon!!

Toru
Thank you so much for correcting me!
I'm well now. :D

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