【No. 0130】Hill Climbing
Apr 27, 2015 19:23
Today, I woke up at 5:00 a.m., and I climbed a hill riding my road bike.
I patiently climbed 30 km, and took a little rest when I arrived to the top of the mountain, and descended 30 km.
Although roads that lead to the top were concreted, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
I patiently climbed 30 km, and took a little rest when I arrived to the top of the mountain, and descended 30 km.
Although roads that lead to the top were concreted, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
今日は朝5時に置きて、ロードバイクで山を登りに行きました。
ひたすら30km坂を登って、山頂についたら一休みし、ひたすら30km下りました。
コンクリートで舗装された道でしたが、急勾配もあったため、なかなか大変でした。
しかし、今日は雲ひとつ無い快晴で、とても気持ちよかったです。
ひたすら30km坂を登って、山頂についたら一休みし、ひたすら30km下りました。
コンクリートで舗装された道でしたが、急勾配もあったため、なかなか大変でした。
しかし、今日は雲ひとつ無い快晴で、とても気持ちよかったです。
Corrections (4)
No. 1 Jess
- Today, I woke up at 5:00 a.m., and I climbed a hill riding my road bike.
- Today I woke up at 5:00 a.m. and climbed a hill on my road bike.
- I patiently climbed 30 km, and took a little rest when I arrived to the top of the mountain, and descended 30 km.
- I patiently climbed 30 km and took a little rest when I arrived to the top of the mountain, then I descended 30 km.
- Although roads that lead to the top were concreted, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Fab!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Sunny
- I patiently climbed 30 km, and took a little rest when I arrived to the top of the mountain, and descended 30 km.
- I patiently climbed 30 km, took a little rest when I arrived at the top of the mountain, and then descended 30 km.
- Although roads that lead to the top were concreted, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Very well written! And what a nice adventure. I'd love to do that sometime, but waking up at 5 am definitely takes a lot of motivation, haha... :')
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting me! I'm glad about your words. :)
Haha, it sounds difficult to wake up early in the morning indeed, but I think it is really good for cyclist because there are almost no cars on the roads.
Thank you so much for correcting me! I'm glad about your words. :)
Haha, it sounds difficult to wake up early in the morning indeed, but I think it is really good for cyclist because there are almost no cars on the roads.
No. 3 Eddie
- Hill Climbing
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Although roads that lead to the top were concreted, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
- Although roads that lead to the top were paved, it was really hard to climb because the roads had some steep slopes.
- However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
- However, there was not a single cloud in the blue sky, so I felt so good.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 4 Eddie
自転車をこぐことはいいですね。私が住んでいる場所は丘もあります。
Toru
Thank you for your comment!
丘があるのは素敵ですよね！
私は自転車に乗るのが好きですが、特に丘を登るのが好きです。
頂上まで登り切ったときは、達成感があって、とても気分が良いです。:)
Thank you for your comment!
丘があるのは素敵ですよね！
私は自転車に乗るのが好きですが、特に丘を登るのが好きです。
頂上まで登り切ったときは、達成感があって、とても気分が良いです。:)