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【No. 0067】Cook Hot Curry

Feb 23, 2015 22:56
　Yesterday, I cooked hot curry for my dinner. Since I used an expensive Japanese Black Wagyu, it became delicious. However, I cooked the curry too much (I made 6 servings), so today's my breakfast and lunch and dinner were also the curry. I think a few percent of now my body is composed of the curry. I'm worried whether my body is giving off a curry smell.

Corrections (1)

No. 1　brburzon
  • Yesterday, I cooked hot curry for my dinner.
  • Yesterday, I cooked hot curry for my dinner.

    It's implied.

  • Since I used an expensive Japanese Black Wagyu, it became delicious.
  • Since I used an expensive Japanese Black Wagyu, it became delicious. (You can also say: Since I used an expensive Japanese Black Wagyu, it was so delicious. )

    If you use "was" you may add "so" to intensify the difference between using cheap and expensive curry mix.

  • However, I cooked the curry too much (I made 6 servings), so today's my breakfast and lunch and dinner were also the curry.
  • However, I cooked too much curry (I made 6 servings), so today's my breakfast, and lunch, and dinner were also the curry.

    I cooked the curry too much means you cooked it for too long.

  • I think a few percent of now my body is composed of the curry.
  • I think a few percent of now my body is now composed of the curry.

    It sounds more natural this way.

  • I'm worried whether my body is giving off a curry smell.
  • I'm worried that my body might be giving off a curry smell.

    "Whether" is more often use to compare two situation that are in the sentence. "might" implies the possibility.

Good job! =)

Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D

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