【No. 0045】Graduation Thesis
Feb 1, 2015 23:05
In Japan, the graduation season is approaching. As is often the case, graduate research presentations are held in Mid-February, the deadline for graduation thesis is February as well.
Today, I read and corrected my junior's master theses carefully almost all day. It stands to reason that every sentence he wrote is perfect, but the connections of sentences were sometimes unnatural. Also, his story was sometimes logically incoherent. I was patiently looking for his mistakes and wrote correction comments. I was a little tired, but I'm happy to feel my junior's growth.
Today, I read and corrected my junior's master theses carefully almost all day. It stands to reason that every sentence he wrote is perfect, but the connections of sentences were sometimes unnatural. Also, his story was sometimes logically incoherent. I was patiently looking for his mistakes and wrote correction comments. I was a little tired, but I'm happy to feel my junior's growth.
Corrections (2)
No. 1 Timmy
- Today, I read and corrected my junior's master theses carefully almost all day.
- Today, almost all day I carefully read and corrected (or: proofread) my junior's master theses.
He is lucky that he has such a good senpai ^^
Toru
Thank you so much always correcting me! :)
That's very nice of you to say. (^-^)
Thank you so much always correcting me! :)
That's very nice of you to say. (^-^)
Timmy
You are welcome!
You are welcome!
No. 2 Just a Simple Meerkat
- In Japan, the graduation season is approaching.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- As is often the case, graduate research presentations are held in Mid-February, the deadline for graduation thesis is February as well.
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As is often the case, graduate research presentations are held in Mid-February, and the deadline for graduation theses is in February as well.
The plural of thesis is theses. Pronunciation: http://static.sfdict.com/staticrep/dictaudio/T02/T0226800.mp3
- Today, I read and corrected my junior's master theses carefully almost all day.
- I spent most of the day today carefully proofreading my junior's master theses.
- It stands to reason that every sentence he wrote is perfect, but the connections of sentences were sometimes unnatural.
- Every sentence that he wrote was basically perfect, but sometimes the sentence connections were (a bit )unnatural.
- Also, his story was sometimes logically incoherent.
- Also, the flow of his story was sometimes incoherent. // Also, his story was sometimes illogical.
- I was patiently looking for his mistakes and wrote correction comments.
- I was patiently looked for his mistakes and wrote him correction comments.
- I was a little tired, but I'm happy to feel my junior's growth.
- I was a little tired by the end of it, but I'm happy to see his growth.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting me!^^
You look like a programmer because you used Inline comment syntax. :D
Thank you so much for correcting me!^^
You look like a programmer because you used Inline comment syntax. :D
Just a Simple Meerkat
Haha, I'm not sure what that is, but that's kind of cool! And, not a problem! I did notice one error though, I'm sure you noticed it but just in case - in the second correction it should say "carefully proofreading my junior's master thesis", not "theses". That's working on the assumption that he only wrote one thesis, though.
Haha, I'm not sure what that is, but that's kind of cool! And, not a problem! I did notice one error though, I'm sure you noticed it but just in case - in the second correction it should say "carefully proofreading my junior's master thesis", not "theses". That's working on the assumption that he only wrote one thesis, though.
Toru
Thank you for your additional correction! I learned a lot.(^^)
In fact, double slash (//) means inline comments in many programming languages. :)
Thank you for your additional correction! I learned a lot.(^^)
In fact, double slash (//) means inline comments in many programming languages. :)
Just a Simple Meerkat
Oh, interesting, I didn't know that! Now the next time someone says that to me I'll just go along with it and say, "Oh, you noticed? It's just an old habit!", lol. Not really, that would be lying. haha
Oh, interesting, I didn't know that! Now the next time someone says that to me I'll just go along with it and say, "Oh, you noticed? It's just an old habit!", lol. Not really, that would be lying. haha