My First Paycheck

Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.

I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.

I was deeply moved.

Maybe I was smirking.

I'm not sure what I should use my.

First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.

After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.

Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.

Hehehe.

初給料

今日は、待ちに待った初めてのお給料日です。

恐る恐るATMで通帳の残高を確認したら、無事振り込まれていました。

感動です。

顔がにやけます。

初給料で何をしようか迷います。

まず、ゴールデンウィークに、両親にご飯をごちそうして、贈り物をしようと思います。

それから、お世話になった指導教員の先生にもご飯をごちそうしたいです。

最後に、自分のために新しいパソコンとiPadが欲しいです。

へへへ。

その感動、まだ覚えています！やったね。ところで、ここで「やったね」と言ってなんか変ですね（笑）
ご両親にご飯をごちそうするのがおすすめです。私は初めて給料をもらった後、おばあちゃんに履き心地の良い靴をプレゼントしました。おばあちゃんがとても嬉しそうに見えました。

• Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.
• Today, for the first time in my life, is my long-awaited payday.

  More interesting and clearer.

• I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• I was deeply moved.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• Maybe I was smirking.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• I'm not sure what I should use my.
• I'm not sure how I should spend it.

• First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.
• To start it off, I will buy dinner and gifts for my parents during next Golden Week holidays.

  If you only have a single parent, then you can change gifts and parents to singular.

• After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.
• After that, I'd like to treat my mentor who taught me at the university.

  treat = buy lunch or dinner but informal

• Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• Hehehe.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Money makes the world go round huh? Especially our world. =) Congrats!