My New Post

Apr 1, 2016 22:57
Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty of a university.

First, I received a letter of appointment, then participated in a workshop for new teachers.

After that, I participated in a faculty meeting and a drinking party.

This party was held as a welcome party of new teachers.

I drank a lot and ate dishes while talking with various teachers.

I tasted also delicious wine.

I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.

I will do my best in this university.
着任

今日は大学の教員として、ついに就任しました。

まずは辞令交付を終え、研修会に参加しました。

それから教授会に参加し、後は飲み会です。

この飲み会は、新任の先生の歓迎会として開催されました。

多くの先生と会話しながら、ご飯を食べ、お酒をいっぱい飲みました。

美味しいワインも頂きました。

素敵な先生たちばかりで、とても恵まれていると感じました。

この大学でこれから頑張ります。
No. 1 Wendy
  • I tasted also delicious wine.
  • I also tasted delicious wine.
  • I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
  • I feel that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.

    'Felt' is past tense, and 'I'm' is present tense. Keep the tense the same in a sentence.

Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Dave Co
  • Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty of a university.
  • Today, I finally assumed a post of a faculty in the university.
  • First, I received a letter of appointment, then participated in a workshop for new teachers.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • After that, I participated in a faculty meeting and a drinking party.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This party was held as a welcome party of new teachers.
  • This party was held as a welcome party for new teachers.
  • I drank a lot and ate dishes while talking with various teachers.
  • I drank a lot and ate food while talking with various teachers.
  • I tasted also delicious wine.
  • I also tasted delicious wine.
  • I felt that I'm blessed with fantastic professors and teachers.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I will do my best in this university.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

おめでとうございます:D

Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment!
ありがとうございます (^^)
No. 3 thethinker83

Best of luck to you! :)

Toru
Thank you for the nice comment! (^^)