Tasks in Tokyo
Mar 1, 2016 23:53
Today, I took a day off from work, and went to Tokyo.
This is because I had to make documents for next fiscal year.
There were a lot of people, so I felt depressed.
However, my mother visited me today.
She bought supplies for my new life, and treated me to a delicious lunch and dinner.
It was really helpful, and I'm filled with gratitude.
She is youthful, cheerful and lovely.
My mother is my pride.
This is because I had to make documents for next fiscal year.
There were a lot of people, so I felt depressed.
However, my mother visited me today.
She bought supplies for my new life, and treated me to a delicious lunch and dinner.
It was really helpful, and I'm filled with gratitude.
She is youthful, cheerful and lovely.
My mother is my pride.
東京での作業
今日は一日休みを取り、早朝から東京へ行きました。
来年度のための書類などを作成するためです。
人が多く大変混雑していて、とても疲れました。
しかし、母親が遊びに来てくれて、新居のための生活用品などを買ってくれ、ご飯をご馳走してくれました。
本当に助かり、感謝の気持ちでいっぱいです。
とても若々しくて元気で可愛らしい、私の自慢の母親です。
今日は一日休みを取り、早朝から東京へ行きました。
来年度のための書類などを作成するためです。
人が多く大変混雑していて、とても疲れました。
しかし、母親が遊びに来てくれて、新居のための生活用品などを買ってくれ、ご飯をご馳走してくれました。
本当に助かり、感謝の気持ちでいっぱいです。
とても若々しくて元気で可愛らしい、私の自慢の母親です。
No. 1 Chris
- Today, I took a day off from work, and went to Tokyo.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- This is because I had to make documents for next fiscal year.
- This is because I had to make documents for the next fiscal year.
- There were a lot of people, so I felt depressed.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, my mother visited me today.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- She bought supplies for my new life, and treated me to a delicious lunch and dinner.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It was really helpful, and I'm filled with gratitude.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- She is youthful, cheerful and lovely.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- My mother is my pride.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 ntan
- Tasks in Tokyo
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Errands in Tokyo
I think "errands" would be a better word - We usually say we're "running errands" when we have tasks to do outside
- Today, I took a day off from work, and went to Tokyo.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- There were a lot of people, so I felt depressed.
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There were a lot of people, so I felt depressed.
You can also say "It was very crowded, so I felt depressed"
- However, my mother visited me today.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- She bought supplies for my new life, and treated me to a delicious lunch and dinner.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It was really helpful, and I'm filled with gratitude.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- She is youthful, cheerful and lovely.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- My mother is my pride.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post and letting me know the word "errand!"
I like it :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post and letting me know the word "errand!"
I like it :D