First Dream of the Year

Jan 2, 2016 16:25
First Dream of the Year is called Hatsuyume in Japan.

Japanese people often forecast the year's fortune from the contents of Hatsuyume.

There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents highly auspicious tokens in Hatsuyume.

This means that the most auspicious one is Mount Fuji, the second one is a hawk, and the third one is an eggplant.

Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to auspicious.

On the other hand, dreams to be encouraged by oneself and to be chased seem to be bad.

In my Hatsuyume, I was riding my road bike with old friends.
初夢

新年を迎えてから初めて見る夢を、初夢と言います。

日本では、初夢の内容で1年の吉凶を占う風習があります。

初夢に見ると縁起が良いものを表す諺に「一富士二鷹三茄子」というものがあります。

最も縁起の良いものが富士山、次が鷹、三番目が茄子という意味です。

また、死ぬ夢や震災の夢、排泄物や血の夢も縁起が良いそうです。

自分に励まされる夢や追いかけられる夢は悪い夢だそうです。

私は旧友とロードバイクに乗っている初夢を見ました。
No. 1 Joe
  • First Dream of the Year
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • First Dream of the Year is called Hatsuyume in Japan.
  • The first dream of the year is called "Hatsuyume" in Japan.
  • Japanese people often forecast the year's fortune from the contents of Hatsuyume.
  • Japanese people often forecast predict the year's fortune from the contents of Hatsuyume.

    Forecast is usually a word associated with weather and doesn't make sense in this context.

  • There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents highly auspicious tokens in Hatsuyume.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This means that the most auspicious one is Mount Fuji, the second one is a hawk, and the third one is an eggplant.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to auspicious.
  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to be auspicious.
  • On the other hand, dreams to be encouraged by oneself and to be chased seem to be bad.
  • On the other hand, dreams to be encouraged of being encouraged by oneself and to be of being chased seem to be bad.

    I can't really explain this, it's kind of a weird English rule. Just know that you're trying to describe what the dreams are about, so you need "of".

  • In my Hatsuyume, I was riding my road bike with old friends.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

There are very few mistakes here, and most of the ones I corrected made sense and were just corrected for the sake of clarity. Your English is very good, and I actually had to look up what auspicious meant. Keep it up!

Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm glad to hear you say that, I will keep trying my best! :)
No. 2 Yukinekorin
  • First Dream of the Year
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • First Dream of the Year is called Hatsuyume in Japan.
  • The first dream of the year is called Hatsuyume in Japan.
  • Japanese people often forecast the year's fortune from the contents of Hatsuyume.
  • Japanese people often predict the year's fortune from the contents of their Hatsuyume.
  • There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents highly auspicious tokens in Hatsuyume.
  • There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents the highly auspicious tokens seen in Hatsuyume.
  • This means that the most auspicious one is Mount Fuji, the second one is a hawk, and the third one is an eggplant.
  • This means that the most auspicious one is Mount Fuji, followed by the hawk, and the last one is an eggplant.

    Another way to phrase it :)

  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to auspicious.
  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to be auspicious.
  • On the other hand, dreams to be encouraged by oneself and to be chased seem to be bad.
  • On the other hand, dreams of being encouraged by someone and of being chased seem to be bad.
  • In my Hatsuyume, I was riding my road bike with old friends.
  • In my Hatsuyume, I was riding my road bike with my old friends.

Interesting :D In Chinese customs, there are something like that too, but we do not really predict our dreams from there. Some of us just treat it as a guide or a normal dream. So is your dream considered good or bad? :)

Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post, and letting my know the interesting thing! :)
In my dream, actually I was climbing a mountain by my bicycle, and it was a race and I was chased by my friends. Mountains are good, but to being chased is bad, so I think my dream was normal, haha.
Yukinekorin
No problem!! ^^ hahaha I see, so I guess it's just a normal dream where you dream about your life xD
No. 3 デクラン
  • Japanese people often forecast the year's fortune from the contents of Hatsuyume.
  • Japanese people often predict the year's fortune from the contents of their Hatsuyume.
  • There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents highly auspicious tokens in Hatsuyume.
  • There is the saying "Ichi fuji ni taka san nasu," which represents highly auspicious tokens seen in Hatsuyume.
  • This means that the most auspicious one is Mount Fuji, the second one is a hawk, and the third one is an eggplant.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to auspicious.
  • Also, dreams of death, disaster, excrement and blood also seem to auspicious.
  • In my Hatsuyume, I was riding my road bike with old friends.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

I can't remember what I dreamt of last night! I don't think it was Mount Fuji or an eggplant though, haha

Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
Haha, to remember dreams is really difficult with no regard to them.