A Very Small Miracle
Jul 10, 2015 10:42
This morning, I went to co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
I choose a rice ball and a drink box.
The total price of them was 227 yen.
In my wallet, there are some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
I thought I have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
It was perfectly completely matching!
Now, my wallet is very light, hehe.
I choose a rice ball and a drink box.
The total price of them was 227 yen.
In my wallet, there are some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
I thought I have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
It was perfectly completely matching!
Now, my wallet is very light, hehe.
No. 1 sheodox
- A Very Small Miracle
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- This morning, I went to co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- This morning, I went to my university's co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- I choose a rice ball and a drink box.
- I chose a rice ball and a drink box.
- The total price of them was 227 yen.
- The total price of them was 227 yen.
- In my wallet, there are some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
- In my wallet, there are were some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
- I thought I have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
- I thought I would have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
- It was perfectly completely matching!
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It was the perfect amount!
「I had the perfect amount of change!」ももっと自然ように聞こえると思います。
- Now, my wallet is very light, hehe.
- Now, my wallet is very light, hehe.
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 OncomingStorm
- A Very Small Miracle
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- This morning, I went to co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- This morning, I went to the co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- I choose a rice ball and a drink box.
- I choose chose a rice ball and a drink box.
- The total price of them was 227 yen.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In my wallet, there are some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I thought I have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
- I thought I would have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
- It was perfectly completely matching!
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It was perfectly and completely matching!
perfectly and completely mean the same thing you could drop the "and completely" and it would still make sense.
- Now, my wallet is very light, hehe.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections! :)
Thank you so much for the corrections! :)
No. 3 Oanh Nguyen
- This morning, I went to co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- This morning, I went to the co-op store of my university and bought my breakfast.
- I choose a rice ball and a drink box.
- I choose onea rice ball serve and one kinda drink box.
- The total price of them was 227 yen.
- The total price of them was 227 yen.
- In my wallet, there are some coins and a 5000 yen bill.
- In my wallet, there weare some coins and thea bill of 5000 yen bill.
- I thought I have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there was one 100 yen coin, two 50 yen coins, two 10 yen coins, one 5 yen coin, and two 1 yen coins.
- I thought I would have to use the bill, but when I counted the coins, there wasere sonme 100 yekinds of coins, twosuch 50as yen coins,e twof 100 yen, ctwoins, onef 50 yen coin, and two of 10 yen coins.
- It was perfectly completely matching!
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Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections!
Thank you so much for the corrections!