Common Cold
May 3, 2015 21:20
Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
I think I probably caught a cold.
I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
I think I probably caught a cold.
I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
今日は一日中、頭が痛く、喉の調子も変で、気分が悪かったです。
恐らく風邪を引いたのだと思います。
沢山寝て、早く治したいです。
恐らく風邪を引いたのだと思います。
沢山寝て、早く治したいです。
No. 1 thethinker83
- Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
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Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
I deleted "a" since there is pain in more than one place (head and throat).
- I think I probably caught a cold.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Take care!
Toru
Thank you so much for your correction and kind comment! :D
Thank you so much for your correction and kind comment! :D
No. 2 Timmy
May your recovery be a quick and zippy one!
Toru
Thank you for your comment!
I have completely recovered. :D
Thank you for your comment!
I have completely recovered. :D
Timmy
Good for you!
Good for you!
No. 3 Eddie
- Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I think I probably caught a cold.
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I think I probably caught a cold.
It's ok, but a bit redundant. Have only "think" or "probably" in the sentence
- I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
お大事に
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting me!
もう元気になりました。(^^)
Thank you very much for correcting me!
もう元気になりました。(^^)
No. 4 Sunny
- Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
- Today, I have had this pain in my head and throat, and I've felt awful almost all day.
- I think I probably caught a cold.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Get well soon!!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting me!
I'm well now. :D
Thank you so much for correcting me!
I'm well now. :D