A Fact about Suicide in Japan

　Today, I'd like to write a hidden fact about suicide in Japan. In Japan, it is reported that the number of suicide is around 30,000 people per year for the last 10 years. This is not a small number, however, can it be true? In fact, WHO says that the number of suicide in Japan is around 110,000 people per year. In Japan, the number of unnatural death is 150,000 people per year. WHO counted the half number of unnatural death as the number of suicide. However, Japanese government doesn't say that. Also, they doesn't recognize a suicide without a testament as a suicide, and the suicide without the testament is counted as an unnatural death. Therefore, it is said that the accurate number of suicide in Japan is around 180,000 people per year. On the other hand, the number of deaths in Japan is around 1.2 million people per year. This means that one people out of seven people in Japan will die in suicide. I think this is a horrible fact.

• A Fact about Suicide in Japan
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• Today, I'd like to write a hidden fact about suicide in Japan.
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• In Japan, it is reported that the number of suicide is around 30,000 people per year for the last 10 years.
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• This is not a small number, however, can it be true?
• This is not a small number, however, can this be true?

• In fact, WHO says that the number of suicide in Japan is around 110,000 people per year.
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• In Japan, the number of unnatural death is 150,000 people per year.
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• WHO counted the half number of unnatural death as the number of suicide.
• WHO counted the only half number of the number of unnatural deaths as the number of suicide.

• However, Japanese government doesn't say that.
• However, the Japanese government doesn't say that/ see it that way.

• Also, they doesn't recognize a suicide without a testament as a suicide, and the suicide without the testament is counted as an unnatural death.
• Also, it doesn't recognize a suicide without a testament as a suicide note, and it will be suicide without the testament is counted as an unnatural death.

• Therefore, it is said that the accurate number of suicide in Japan is around 180,000 people per year.
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• On the other hand, the number of deaths in Japan is around 1.2 million people per year.
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• This means that one people out of seven people in Japan will die in suicide.
• This means that one people out of seven people in Japan will commit suicide.

  sounds more natural

• I think this is a horrible fact.
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• In fact, WHO says that the number of suicide in Japan is around 110,000 people per year.
• In fact, WHO (World Health Organization) says that the number of suicide in Japan is around 110,000 people per year.

• I think this is a horrible fact.
• I think this is a horrible (or: terrifying) fact.

It's sad but it's true(