OMG! I Caused A Car Accident! (ﾟдﾟ)

It was snowing a lot this morning.

After I shoveled the snow that was piled around my car, I was trying to back the car from the parking area.

I couldn't see behind securely due to the snow, and there is a parked car on my car's behind.

"Bump!" The sound made my face pale, and my heart was in my mouth.

The car's license plate and my car's left-side rear were dented.

However, there was nobody in the car and the owner was close by, so we could talk to each other immediately.

(I think these things were a blessing in disguise.)

First, I tried to call the police, but he said "You need not to do that."

As a result of our talking, it was decided only that I will pay a fee for repairing his car.

Definitely, I was relieved because there were no injured, and the car's owner was a good man.

I'll be careful from now on.

今朝は雪が沢山降っていました。

私は車に積もった雪と車の周辺の雪をどけて、駐車場から車をバックで出そうとしました。

雪のため後ろがしっかりと確認できていませんでしたが、バックした先には駐車中の車があったのです。

「ガンッ」と音が鳴り、顔が青ざめ、生きた心地がしませんでした。

相手の車のナンバープレートと、私の車の左側のリアが凹んでしまいました。

幸い車には誰も乗っておらず、持ち主は近くにいたので、すぐに話し合うことができました。

私は警察に連絡しようとしましたが、相手にはそんな必要は無いと言われました。

話し合いの結果、修理費用だけ後日請求してもらうことになりました。

大事故にならず、そして相手がいい人で、良かったです。

これからはもっと慎重に運転したいです。

• It was snowing a lot this morning.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• I couldn't see behind securely due to the snow, and there is a parked car on my car's behind.
• I couldn't see behind securely clearly due to the snow, and there is was a car parked behind my car. a parked car on my car's behind.

• "Bump!" The sound made my face pale, and my heart was in my mouth.
• "Bump!" The sound made my face pale, and my heart was in my mouth.

  this is ok, but another good phrase in english for that sinking feeling is "my stomach dropped"

• The car's license plate and my car's left-side rear were dented.
• The other car's license plate and my car's left-side rear were dented.

• However, there was nobody in the car and the owner was close by, so we could talk to each other immediately.
• This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

• First, I tried to call the police, but he said "You need not to do that."
• At first, I tried to call the police, but he said "You don't need to do that need not to do that."

  more natural

• As a result of our talking, it was decided only that I will pay a fee for repairing his car.
• As a result of our conversation talking, it was decided only that I will only pay a fee for repairing his car.

• Definitely, I was relieved because there were no injured, and the car's owner was a good man.
• Definitely, I was definitely relieved because there were no no one was injured, and the car's owner was a good man.

• I'll be careful from now on.
• I'll be more careful from now on.

Driving in snow can be dangerous, take care!

• I couldn't see behind securely due to the snow, and there is a parked car on my car's behind.
• I couldn't see behind me well due to the snow, and there was a parked car on my car's behind. (or: parked car right behind me in the driveway)

• Definitely, I was relieved because there were no injured, and the car's owner was a good man.
• Definitely, I was relieved because there were no one injured, and the car's owner was a good man.

All's well that ends well

Kanotown -you write very well! :D It was a very exciting entry indeed and your sounds effects made me laugh :)) There are lots of lovely phrases in your entry. But I hope you're feeling okay!

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• After I shoveled the snow that was piled around my car, I was trying to back the car from the parking area.
• After I shoveled the snow that had piled around my car, I was trying to back the car from the parking area.

• First, I tried to call the police, but he said "You need not to do that."
• At first, I tried to call the police, but he told me that it wasn't necessary.