I bought an electric heating blanket.

Dec 21, 2014 20:22
I bought an electric heating blanket.

My room is freezing cold.
If I put a cup of water on the desk in my room through the night, the water will freeze.
So today, I bought an electric heating blanket and used it.

As a result...what a wonderful product...
The electric blanket become warm quickly, and it made my cold body and heart warm gradually.
I am in the Seventh Heaven.
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  • I bought an electric heating blanket.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • My room is freezing cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • If I put a cup of water on the desk in my room through the night, the water will freeze.
  • If I leave a cup of water on the desk in my room through the night, the water will freeze.

    'Put' is an action that happens in a single moment, so it can't be paired with an expression like "through the night" that refers to a length of time.

  • As a result...
  • As a result...

    As a result should be followed by the result. For example, "As a result, I was warm all night long."

  • what a wonderful product...
  • What a wonderful product!

    Don't use ellipses (...) so much

  • The electric blanket become warm quickly, and it made my cold body and heart warm gradually.
  • The electric blanket became warm quickly, and it gradually warmed my cold body and heart.

    The past tense of become is became.

  • I am in the Seventh Heaven.
  • I am in the seventh heaven.

    This isn't wrong, but it's a really old fashioned expression. I've never actually heard anyone say it, I've only ever read it. Avoid it if you want to sound like a native.

Toru
  • I am in the seventh heaven.

    This isn't wrong, but it's a really old fashioned expression. I've never actually heard anyone say it, I've only ever read it. Avoid it if you want to sound like a native.

Japanese website say "This idiom is used by a native frequently." You saved me! Thank you so much for your correction!(^-^)
Rocotoc
Hahaha Personally, I have never heard of this expression.

I would just say something like, "I am in heaven" or "I must be in heaven."
Toru
Rocotocさん
Thank you for your comment. (´∀｀*)
I like the sound of that sentence "I must be in heaven.", so I'll use it from today!
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